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2. The 'A Bittersweet Potion' Series

December 14th, 2005 (11:49 pm)

the "A Bittersweet Potion" series

link: http://www.intertexius.com
authors: Alchemia Dent and Bugland
fandom: Harry Potter
rating: chapters vary from PG through NC-17, for psychological stress, graphic sex, and graphic violence
length: epic
summary: Harry Potter gains the powers of a super-animagus, able to transform into anything. In the form of a cat, he is adopted by Snape, which leads to a complicated relationship. This isn't the only problem he has: Harry also has to deal with his bond to Voldemort and the more mundane struggle with identity that every teenager goes through.
status: WIP; 3 books finished, 1 in progress, several to come
rec poinds: +5

Beginning with such a simple premise - Harry becomes Snape's cat, this story moves on to cover complex issues brilliantly. Though several themes wind through the four books, foremost is that of identity and the search for it. When Harry receives the ability to change his form, he finds that his grasp of self is even more tenuous than ever before. Suddenly, not only is he The Boy Who Lived, Just Harry, and Voldemort-Through-Visions, but he is Snape's Cat. The problem escalates when he discovers a sexual attraction to Severus, and then again when he initiates a soul bond, which allows him to see Severus's thoughts and memories. Meanwhile, Harry is a fifteen-year-old boy who is struggling to gain maturity and acceptance, just as his peers are doing. He is lost and confused much of the time, with rare, thin strands of confidence when he knows what he wants.

The imagery is at times subtle, but always strong, giving a sense of loss and confusion that permeates each chapter, echoing the feelings of both Harry and Severus. For not only is Harry struggling to define himself and grow up, but Severus, too, is attempting to do the same, having never had a chance to be truely independent, with no one else for master. Their responses are stiking in similarity, yet completely opposite. In their cravings for affection, neither knows what to do, but while Harry clings to Severus, the older man grows colder and shoves Harry (and everyone else) away. These similarities and differences are cleverly highlighted by the occasional chapter written in Severus's point of view by Bug, though the majority of the novels are seen through Harry's eyes as written by Al.

The NC-17 rating is earned several times over, but do not think that it is a smutty story. Yes, there is sex, but it is deftly woven into the scenes as necessarily as the violence shown. Indeed, for every heartwarming sex-scene, there are at least two more that invoke cringing horror, whether as seen through Harry-as-Voldemort, or between Harry and Severus themselves. In reference to the latter, no two people as unsure about their places or acceptance can have a healthy relationship, though it is attempted. Yet even the violence and sex pale in comparison to the powerfully psychological content. With the former two removed, the pyschologically disturbing material alone would keep the rating high - it is not for the weak of heart or stomach.

However, that is not to say the entire epic is dark. There are very few fluffy chapters in the second or third novels (Procul His and Purification), but both A Bittersweet Potion and The River have plenty. As with the presentation of points of view, the lighter scenes are skillfully interspersed as necessary, adding further depth to an already well-designed plot. It is unfortunate that these scenes never last long, but their marks perpetuate, as in the stars Harry places on the ceiling of Severus's bedroom.

There is very little that could be improved upon. As previously mentioned, the imagery is fantastic and the tale is deftly woven. The darkness is offset by lightness, and each is as necessary as day and night. The themes present are portrayed by people who have experienced the issues (or something like them) themselves, therefore creating very convincing arguments for why things are so. If anything, the story is so complex that it could use occasional summaries to remind the reader of previous events. The epic might be separated into books, but they may very well be termed 'volumes,' because of how even the earliest events play important roles later on. This requires the reader to go back and reread earlier parts, which after 3 novels and another half a novel can take quite a long time, and small details can be forgotten.

I highly recommend this series to anyone who can stand the scenes necessitating the rating. It transcends 'snarry' or 'Harry becomes a cat' into so much more, it ought to be required reading for anyone wanting a deep, complex novel. If Bug and Al weren't constantly editing and improving the earlier books, it would hold a special place in my library of fic, and it is the reason I created the +5 recommendation points.


Posted by: silverhielm (silverhielm)
Posted at: October 6th, 2006 11:07 am (UTC)

Thanks for such a detailed insight, I love reading reviews and this is very well written. I think I'll read this fanfic!
...and please, write more! ♥

Posted by: Keri (keristars)
Posted at: October 7th, 2006 07:21 pm (UTC)

Thank you for the note! This review was one of the two that inspired me to start a review journal at all. Then I got so caught up in school and work, that I didn't have time to organize my thoughts about fic to write more - though I've got at least 17 sitting in a folder to write about.

I just did another one, if you didn't notice it, about Snape's Invisible Friend and its sequels. I've been working on it for two weeks, and it amused me that when it was ready to go up, you'd commented. :P

Posted by: silverhielm (silverhielm)
Posted at: October 7th, 2006 07:35 pm (UTC)

Tell me that "Underwater Light" is in that list! Spoil some fic titles for me *_*
I'll surely read everything you write. I love (good) reviews more than I can explain, and it's painful not to be able t owrite one because English is not your first language and you'd have to filter your thoughts more time to get them in the right shape, thus losing the initial enthusiasm :(
I wrote some recs, anyway!
Annnnddd..I've started ABP. The first 10 chapters are rather nice, there's no violence nor sex so far, but I think that it's worth going on with the reading.

Posted by: madinotgirl77 (madinotgirl77)
Posted at: August 1st, 2007 06:37 am (UTC)


Since you're posting about the Bittersweet Potion Series, I thought I'd ask you a question:

I was reading the story today, went out for a few hours, came back to continue reading and when I tried to get to the next chapter, it asked me for a user name and password...which it has never done before.

Any thoughts? I'd really appreciate it.

Posted by: lady_hojo (lady_hojo)
Posted at: August 2nd, 2007 03:22 am (UTC)

God, it's doing that to me too. If you find out what's going on, please share. =(

Posted by: madinotgirl77 (madinotgirl77)
Posted at: August 2nd, 2007 06:05 am (UTC)

Yay, I finally got in =D! Hope everyone else did!

Posted by: madinotgirl77 (madinotgirl77)
Posted at: August 2nd, 2007 06:06 am (UTC)

Username: "friends" and password "friends"

They locked it for personal reasons..I hope you can get into it now!

Posted by: lady_hojo (lady_hojo)
Posted at: August 2nd, 2007 11:25 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much for the info. I'm gonna friend you now. =3 And the other person inquiring too.

Posted by: fknudsen (fknudsen)
Posted at: September 17th, 2007 03:02 pm (UTC)
Your site.....

for the bittersweet potions series is coming up as unavailable, it came up with this message - This website is currently unavailable. If you are the administrator of this website, please contact us at 1-888-511-4678 Option #4 as soon as possible.

I hope it will be accessible in future as i've only heard the greatest of praises about it.

Many Thanks

I look forward to reading it.


Posted by: ((Anonymous))
Posted at: January 4th, 2011 04:34 am (UTC)
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Posted by: HKPadfoot (hkpadfoot)
Posted at: March 20th, 2011 07:49 pm (UTC)

So do we have any idea what their progress on this is and what's going on with the authors? It hasn't been updated in forever. I know sometimes it takes them time...but I'd be sad not to see this epic adventure completed.

If anybody knows anything about whats going on with them and their website, let me know!

Posted by: ((Anonymous))
Posted at: April 9th, 2011 11:42 am (UTC)

I'm keen to know what's happening too --- has it just gone to a closed community (I've got the opinion multiple times that the authors want to ensure only adults are reading their stories)? Or has it just been abandoned??

Posted by: alchemia (alchemia)
Posted at: July 15th, 2017 01:27 am (UTC)

personal and family medical reasons.
15 yrs since we posted the very first chapter, 10 yrs since we posted the last wip installment... bug and i are working hard at making updates resume this anniversary year.

pls dont reread the old stuff... some edits are being made, which include clarifying some parts ppl said were ambiguous but shouldnt have been, and altering dome clues.. follow either my journals or the ss/hp lj or dw comms to know when the updates are up

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